Well, I suppose it's time for some public disclosure. You kindly refer to me as the beta-reader, but we both know my initial feedback on this wasn't particularly useful (if flattering). It was a lot of babbling, drooling and whimpering, basically.:P So I'll try to be a bit more coherent now... No no no! The initial feedback of "babbling, drooling and whimpering, basically," let me know I was doing things right!
I love the idea of Louis treating their amorous playtime as a "science experiment". I feel like it's something he would do, and Lestat would happily go along with it, thrilled pink that Louis wants to play.;P Tee heee, right? I love a Forward!Louis or Alpha!Louis every now and then ;]
You are so very skillful with language...and you keep getting better at it. It's dangerous, I tell you.;D *collapses* Right in the Feels. This paragraph... made my day/week/month... etc. Truly.
As it's been a few weeks since I've had a chance to comment here, I'd forgotten what I wrote, and your pointing out your favorite bits was extremely gratifying. It reminded me how much fun these are to develop and work out and finally share.
And this is it. You've killed me now. This is the perpetual mental orgasm of good fanfictions (I saw the female masturbation diagrams you reblogged on Tumblr! how accurate, and how very timely!!... LOL). Just replaying this moment in my mind ad infinitum... Eeeee! This is the reaction I was going for. Here's the graph:
Also, I love how the humor doesn't ruin the sexy mood, but somehow adds to it... *u*
because obviously Louis' flashing eyes are a major turn-on and he can't stop himself... Oh I hadn't even thought of that, but I will take credit for it as a happy accident ^_______^
Lestat's possessiveness. Louis' adorable stammering as he struggles to keep his cool. This I sort of borrowed from gairid, I can't remember which, but one of her fics has Lestat struggling to be coherent over the phone whilst "suffering" from Louis' meticulous attention.
Just... all of it. Sweetness, playfulness, love, heat, perfection. Shall I go on?...;) Thank you for such a lovely compliment *cries*
You keep that up, woman, and I just might need reanimation one day. Or an emergency transfusion. So, be prepared to send SOMEONE to the rescue.:P
Just saying. OMG wow.
Not to worry; for the moment I've set the bar too high and am a little intimidated about attempting to surpass that fic. Hopefully, inspiration will strike one of us, and we'll BOTH need rescuing!
Many thanks again for your lovely and well-thought out commentary ♥u♥
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Re: here comes your OFFICIAL feedback, yo
Date: 2014-03-20 02:27 am (UTC)No no no! The initial feedback of "babbling, drooling and whimpering, basically," let me know I was doing things right!
I love the idea of Louis treating their amorous playtime as a "science experiment". I feel like it's something he would do, and Lestat would happily go along with it, thrilled pink that Louis wants to play.;P
Tee heee, right? I love a Forward!Louis or Alpha!Louis every now and then ;]
You are so very skillful with language...and you keep getting better at it. It's dangerous, I tell you.;D
*collapses* Right in the Feels. This paragraph... made my day/week/month... etc. Truly.
As it's been a few weeks since I've had a chance to comment here, I'd forgotten what I wrote, and your pointing out your favorite bits was extremely gratifying. It reminded me how much fun these are to develop and work out and finally share.
And this is it. You've killed me now. This is the perpetual mental orgasm of good fanfictions (I saw the female masturbation diagrams you reblogged on Tumblr! how accurate, and how very timely!!... LOL). Just replaying this moment in my mind ad infinitum...
Eeeee! This is the reaction I was going for. Here's the graph:
http://mannimations.tumblr.com/post/78167512607/vandigo-lilyjoy3025
Also, I love how the humor doesn't ruin the sexy mood, but somehow adds to it...
*u*
because obviously Louis' flashing eyes are a major turn-on and he can't stop himself...
Oh I hadn't even thought of that, but I will take credit for it as a happy accident ^_______^
Lestat's possessiveness. Louis' adorable stammering as he struggles to keep his cool.
This I sort of borrowed from
Just... all of it. Sweetness, playfulness, love, heat, perfection. Shall I go on?...;)
Thank you for such a lovely compliment *cries*
You keep that up, woman, and I just might need reanimation one day. Or an emergency transfusion. So, be prepared to send SOMEONE to the rescue.:P
Just saying.
OMG wow.
Not to worry; for the moment I've set the bar too high and am a little intimidated about attempting to surpass that fic. Hopefully, inspiration will strike one of us, and we'll BOTH need rescuing!
Many thanks again for your lovely and well-thought out commentary ♥u♥